by Austin Mar 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Rejected since day one |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Ive read several of your poems, and this is the one i like the most. you have some homophone issues you need to fix. other than that nicely done. the rhymes didnt see to forced to me. |
Thats an awesome poem! |
Thats an awesome poem! |
by Nikki
Thats good!! |
by Kaila
I really enjoyed this poem! The Ight sound got a little over used but it was still a good poem my favorite stanza was |