It Won't Let Me Go

by myshiningstar14   Mar 26, 2007


Etched.
Your love like
a taste of fine
wine, that washes
down the amber
soul of me.

Carved.
Your name
permanently sewed
into my heart,
stitched with the
strings of "forever"
and "eternity".

Branded.
My skin has seeped
your touch into me,
as it goes so deep it
kisses my soul.

Frozen.
Stilled.
It holds my hand,
and sleeps next to me
deep into the night.

Tombed.
Inside my veins lyes
your beauty bubbling,
oozing like your love as
I squeeze it in my hands,
as it subsides,
pounding,
becoming my beautiful
rapture,;
the death of me.

Locked.
into the night sky,
written into the stars,
sealed forever;
defying hands of time.
One sip and I'm addicted,
one sip and I'm yours.

....its your love that
won't let me go.

**to my baby Ian..your love amazes me. i love you**

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  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    I liked that one. veryvery thoughtful =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom K

    I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, it was like each verse was a new step in your developing love for this person. Good job, thank you for the pleasure of it.
    tom

  • 17 years ago

    by Superman

    This is a really unique write. quite enjoyable