Hmm. I can see why you would put this under dark poems, but it could go in several other places. But whatever, that isn't as important. This poem gave me this scene of a girl sitting in a dark corner. Frightened of love's outcomes. Mascara streaking her cheeks. She is in need of security.

Well that's what I got out of this piece. Nice job.

Hey Jen.

I FOUND YOU!! Now I can haunt your page :]. Just kidding. I know you let me see your poems in class but I decidied I'm gonna be a really nice friend and comment them all! :].