THis is a grat poem, loved it.
def 5/5
keep writing.
-Black night-

Aswsome poem.. and btw thanks for correcting me lol

Awww I Loved It
This Was A Great Poem 5/5

Thats a very sweet poem dedicated to your brother, I have one myself that gets on my nerves but I guess like you said their just looking out. Well a great poem read, 5/5.

This is amazing. i love it :]

I love it =) your amazing,

Luv ur poem i guess all brothers are nice in disguise lol mines the same way xxx luv it xxx

That's so cute, I love it =) And the rhyming didn't sound forced at all.

LOVE IT!!! You are really good at this.
Thanks for the comment

Great poem keep them coming and thanks for your comments xx

I love da first paragrapgh
btw thanks for da comment =]
xx

I like. Not the best butt it is a really good poem. Continue the nice job girl!! Amazing poem 4/5.. xox

Awww, thats adorable, thanx for the comment you sent me
Me and him arent together anymore though
but that was cute

You are an amazing writer and you express your feelings well...........i loved this poem and many of your others. keep it up

LYRIC

That was a very nice poem!!

Hmm this is very good i give it a five cuz its awsome and has potential!!!keep it up and thnx for the comments on mine!

Excellent poemm
i can so related!!!
my brother has always been there for me

Well done saffie,Your poem had such a nice easy going flow. It's funny how we don't know how much some one really cares about you, until they're not there anymore. You're lucky to have a brother that looks out for you, some brothers could care less. Well done dear. Hugs from Doug

VERY MEANINGFULL

Awww,that's sweet!!I like your way to express your feelings for the people you love.... 8-> I miss you a lot :X