My brother

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 26, 2007


My big brother
always buys me things
to make me feel special

my big brother
always makes me food
to make sure i will eat

my big brother
always stays up late
to make sure I'm not lonely

my big brother
always makes me smile
when he can see I'm hurt

my big brother
always looks out for me
cos thats what big brothers do

saffie
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  • 17 years ago

    by naomi

    Luvin this poem bbe xxx take care xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    No I wasn't saying don't write what you think, I was saying don't write the same comments for different peoples poems, for yes they are what you want them to say and what you think. But poems are different and they are not the same. I didn't say don't comment my poems or any peoms, I just said DON'T BE FAKE, atcually have the DECENTCY to WRITE DIFFERENT COMMENTS and NOT THE SAME...that's all....atcually try it
    XD

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Thought this was good, its great to see that you have that connection with your brother.
    lovedf it 5/5
    -Black night-

  • 17 years ago

    by Leona

    This is a good one to, great great job
    Leona