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  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Nice ,good meaning.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Ur poem was cute, i swear... u r religious?

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Ya i am totally christain! lol <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I love you,
    more then the air i breath,"

    Excellent opening, it immediantly showed the depth of the feelings and the rest of the poem followed suit
    A wonderful tribute!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    A beautifully written and really touching poem! it was so simple yet so full of meaning and truth! i loved it! keep it up! xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by STEVE

    Beautiful very meaningful 5/5 Steve