5/5 great poem everyword u wrote was so try and so poetic. ur poems are outstanding dont let others tell u otherwise. keep writing

Ah. I see that this is your normal method of writing. I like it, although I'm not positive why.

Anyways. I found it highly ironic and meaningful that this poem isn't in the sad poems-depression because of the title. I'm hoping this means that you understand that depression is merely a part of life. Either way, I enjoyed this poem. Creative, unique point of view. Nice job!