Comments : Fly

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherise

    Once again your poem amazes me, like they always do:p i really love this, and i know where your coming from and i know how you feel, and i know this whole thing has been tough for you, but you and jon love eachother, and you guys i think can make it through anything
    love yea babes
    -cherise

  • 17 years ago

    by TravisInABottle

    Great poem. I think we all long to escape at times. The only thing I have to say is that at times the flow can be kind of rocky. Other than that, this poem was great!

    -Travis[InABottle]