Comments : What's the use?

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow oh so ver true nice poem 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The rhetorical questions really engaged me to read and ponder. Just in the last line, correct the bloomer that is the word paralize must be paralized. Other that its perfect :)

    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    This one make me have tears in my eyes,

    great one !!!!
    excelent