Well done! I loved this poem, it has alot of strong emotion and it flows very well! Keep up the awesome work! Thank you for your comment on mine, I drastically changed it today.. same idea longer with more feeling.

Well done! I loved this poem, it has alot of strong emotion and it flows very well! Keep up the awesome work! Thank you for your comment on mine, I drastically changed it today.. same idea longer with more feeling.