Vacation

by SomeRomanticGuy   Mar 27, 2007


Minutes turn into hours
hours into days
I hug her goodbye
the rest is all a haze

When I close my eyes I see her
feel her kiss my cheek
We'll be in each others arms soon
if I can sit tight one week.

Time goes by so slowly
when she is out of state
I hope the days go flying by
because these feelings just can't wait

When she comes back
I'll be just fine
I guess I just love having her
here all the time.

My girlfriend is on vacation and I miss her a lot, why not write a poem? I can't wait for her to get back so we can talk for hours! =D Enjoy!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Irish Sweetheart

    That was adorable. Your girlfriend is really lucky to have you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Babe i miss you too!!! this is like murder!!! that poem almost made me cry!!! i really wish you were here, and yes when i get back we'll talk and hang for hours!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    If I can sit tight one week.
    ^ I would suggest adding "more" in before "week", it just sounds better.

    here all the time.
    ^ "Here" should acutally be on the line before.

    THis was sweet, you must really miss your girlfriendd. The flow was pretty good and the rhymes worked quite well. They could still be improved to flow a little bit better but they were good. The descriptions were nice although I would have liked a little more detail. All in all, very sweet though. 5/5

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