If I can sit tight one week.
^ I would suggest adding "more" in before "week", it just sounds better.

here all the time.
^ "Here" should acutally be on the line before.

THis was sweet, you must really miss your girlfriendd. The flow was pretty good and the rhymes worked quite well. They could still be improved to flow a little bit better but they were good. The descriptions were nice although I would have liked a little more detail. All in all, very sweet though. 5/5

Babe i miss you too!!! this is like murder!!! that poem almost made me cry!!! i really wish you were here, and yes when i get back we'll talk and hang for hours!!!

That was adorable. Your girlfriend is really lucky to have you.