Lonely Night

by Rammaneekun   Mar 27, 2007


Look out the window,
It's a lonely night,
There's no trace or shadow,
of a moon or stars in sight,
And I feel hollow,
because a man I love ain't by my side,
all that follows,
is being alone and fright.

After I'd left that feeling,
I became unsure,
I don't trust that voice within,
even if it's, mine or yours,
I just need that answer ( whenever),
to see if your feeling's still pure,
whether you want me to,
be beside you once more.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I don't trust that voice within,
    even if it's, mine or yours,"

    Excellent couplet and overall, quite a powerful poem!
    Very nicely written m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

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