Comments : Even On Days Like This (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Wonderful wording....5/5

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well done. the word was excellent, so was the whole poem.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I really like these first lines:

    Even on days like this
    Validity is hard to come by
    Even though my intellect is like
    No one else's

    Oh how I feel like
    No one cares

    I love your acrostic poems....excellent as always!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was really good. I love acrostics.
    Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Great jon on the acrostic. You like that style, huh? =] I know what it feels like to desire that. You are a great writer!

    Ciao~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I've been here and felt this maybe that's why I loved it so much this is my favorite great job!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Acrostic poems are usually my favorite type of poetry, and I can connect to this poem. I love the choice of words through this piece, particularly in this paragraph:

    Even on days like this
    Validity is hard to come by
    Even though my intellect is like
    No one else's

    Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love the first stanza as well. Beautiful word choice there. Good job on this form!