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by Teria Mar 27, 2007 category : Love, romance / rekindled love
Not a cloud in the sky. Surrender your heart to the one you once loved. For, there will never be another from thy god above. His hand in mine; we stride. Forever in a classy gaze, that started the very night, I lost track of the days... The days that flew by, faster than I could imagine. The days that spread out, by a thousandth of a fraction. The days were taken advantage of, as I lost what'd became a lie. and, there was not a cloud in the sky, to pass my seconds by.
by Gem
Excellent. The flow was like fluid and just rolled smoothly on with each word and the rhyming was spot on An excellent subject complimented with the word usage. Well done on this one. It's beautiful 5/5 *Gem*