by Finalgravedigger Mar 27, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
A journey today, a journey tomorrow each day you may feel sorrow but just wait till tomorrow for another chance to make your journey at hand want to live for another tomorrow. We have problems we have stops but its how you pull through that makes your journey. Its the troubles you face that can make your journey great, so please just wait, wait until the end because you may find something great. |
GREAT POEM DAWG...I LIKE THIS ONE ALOT |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Another great poem with alot of truth to it. You're very talented. Keep it up!! |
Wow u have amazing work! i love this poem it is so true...OMG! i just cant explain it in words |
Now, you were right. You and I, have different views. For me, I feel like you're born into a mold that's impossible to break. For you, as I can tell by reading just this one. You are free, and independant person, who probably thinks, where ever life takes you, you're not broken down by rules. :) Other then that, it was great. |
Wow another good one. but it could be better if you put it in stanzas. but i like you style. LIke you said i can relate. Nice poem well done. 5/5. really deep. |