Wow that was interesting nice poem however 5/5 perhaps you can read one of mine.

Superb!

WOW! That is GREAT!! I totally understand.
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Sum, U & me understand poetry better then our friends. I never really thought I find anyone who does in my group of friends. Sum, I'm glad I don't hate u anymore.
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GREAT POEM!!

This reminds me of a girl i know.
i love poems that remind me of myself or of people i know so i love this poem!
good job writing it.