Heh, cheers for the comment, always a pleasure to know someone is reading your work - makes me feel special *said in a silly voice* lol. Anywho, thought it was really profound poem. Could really feel the bitterness of your self hate. I think we all hate the flaws with our bodies, especially me. Just remember beauty is in the eye of the beholder - or at a party the beer holder, lol - but i am sure you are perfectly attractive. the whole line bout fingers down your throat, dont get into that habit, really doesnt do you any good, I am certain you look great the way you are.
great job
and def 5/5
dont stop the writing
-Black night-

Superbly written! x

I Love Your Poetry, You Have Skills =]