Wow...deep
by the way, i was wondering if you could comment on my last two poems. i value your opinion highly and would greatly appreciate your input. thanks.
if you dont have the time, thats ok, maybe some other time then.
anyway, again, wow, you have wonderful talent.
always a fan
*AntiSocial16*

Wow, i have heard so much about your work but never looked at it properly. this poem is captivating, the images and analogys in it are absolutely out of this world, i cannot believe how good your work is.
wow

That was a deep poe. I didnt quiet get the message until the end. I think the wording could have been a bit better, but I still liked it. I liked the end and how it made the entire poem make sense.

That was a deep poe. I didnt quiet get the message until the end. I think the wording could have been a bit better, but I still liked it. I liked the end and how it made the entire poem make sense.

I like the flow of this and the unique way you've phrased the images and meanings. This is deep. I love the ending.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

GaryJ