It's Funny...

by LockedInEternity   Mar 27, 2007


It's funny how one email,
Can destroy something so big.
Can break something that seemed so strong,
Like a small, pathetic twig.

It's funny how I trust them,
Even when things go wrong.
And I just reassure myself,
"Don't worry, you belong"

And it's funny how I tried to fill,
The things I thought it lacked.
But all my dumb idea did,
Was stomp on where it had been cracked.

How funny, that I thought they cared.
I thought I meant something to them.
But I was just a petty flower,
At which they laughed and broke the stem.

Oh and it's funny how they say,
"Sure, we still want to be your friend"
"Or how 'bout just two separate people?"
Who cares if this will ever mend?

And then it's funny how again,
They say I'm fine without their crew.
But what they really mean to say,
Is that "We're just fine without you."

It's funny how I still believe,
That this friendship was real.
That we will all get over this,
That all the wounds will heal.

It's funny, oh how funny
How when i think of it I cry.
I blame myself for everything,
For all the friendships that'll die.

And it's funny how I hate myself,
And how I spend my lunch alone
With every f u c k i n g step I take.
I slowly crumble into stone.

Hilarious, that's what it is,
It's just what I deserve.
And I bet they'll still be laughing,
When my razor hits a nerve.

** incase some of you dont understand the " two seperate people" line...its just something stupid my friends said to me...it was more like "why dont we just be two seperate ppl that are just nice to eachother but arent friends"....crap right?...:@
:)hope that helped

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  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Like a small, pathetic twig.
    That line seemed forced, dear.

    Second line?
    Relatable :]

    But all my dumb idea did[[,]]
    That doesn't need a comma in there.

    Umm...
    Actually, you have a lot of commas that don't belong.

    And then it's funny how again,
    They say I'm fine without their crew.
    But what they really mean to say,
    Is that "We're just fine without you."

    Love that line.

    That everyday I cry.
    That's a bit overdramatic.

    When my razor hits a nerve.
    I don't like that.
    Dear, I know that poems are about expressing ones feelings.
    But you shouldn't cut or hurt yourself.
    It's not really the way.
    I don't like your ending of this poem.
    It's a bit... scary in my eyes.

    All in all.
    Best poem I've read other than the other one.
    Lol.
    Sorry I'm not being so specific.
    I forgot to title.
    5/5?

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was really really dark, but i loved it. I was enchated by the words, and couldn't have stopped reading it to save my own life. so far this poem is one of the best ones I have read today. all yours are exceptional. This one is no diffrent. the flow again was absoulty perfect, the word choice was brilantly placed, and the emtions were effin powerful. Great job. I hope you keep writting so i can keep reading, I would be at a loss if i couldn't read your written words. It might very well become my newest addiction. lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Wow, amazing and no doubt straight from your heart. I loved it through and through, and you painted an excellent picture of harship emotions. The flow was PERFECT. The rhyming was excellent. The poem Idea was Unique.

    "Or how 'bout just two separate people?"
    Who cares if this will ever mend?
    ^^^I didn't understand what you meant here at all....

    An amazing write, I love your poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing.

    "But I was just a petty flower,
    At which they laughed and broke the stem."
    ^ That couplet was a really good metaphor, that I have quite frankly never seen anywhere else. Wonderful.

    "Hilarious, that's what it is,
    It's just what I deserve.
    And I bet they'll still be laughing,
    When my razor hits a nerve. "

    ^ Oh gosh. That stanza hit me VERY HARD..... terribly sad to read hun..... Though fantastic all the same.

    Overall, purely superb! Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow! the ending was completely unexpected i loved it... the flow was off in a few places but the word choice and rhymes were great... you express youself nicely and do well by not falling into cliche's

    by the way i LOVE this part of your poem "With every f u c k i n g step I take.
    I slowly crumble into stone."

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