From The Heart

by Sam Richards   Mar 27, 2007


As painful as it is
You are my sweet ecstasy
And though the needle hurts
Youre worth the pain

Despite the fact were all small dots
Its you the sun glows for
And its me who would ignite my soul
Just to make it brighter

I want you to be mine
So I can parade to the world
Carve your name into mountains
Rearrange the stars in the moonlit sky

Youre no angel
It must be said
But still you blaze and glimmer
Dont leave my head

You can melt the coldest glacier
And flood into my life
You cant go unnoticed
I make sure of that

The clouds part and the heavens shine
When your words bond with mine
Shatters earthquakes down my spine
Just for who you are, now lets cross that line

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  • 17 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Sam,
    Positive Comments:
    * I think it's well written the way ou seperated the rhyming scheme.
    * I enjoyed the use of emotion as we have talked about this and you do well in expressing how you feel in a way that still makes you seem like it is all not true, that you are truly the happiest man on earth.
    * I love you.
    Negative comments:

    * Grammar: WERE (we're - we are?) all small dots
    ITS (It's or It is) you the sun glows for
    And ITS (It's or It is)
    Be careful for that sweet.

    Well-written, Love you lots
    Kisses
    IxI 0pium IxI