Solitary Confinement

by Gasttlee   Mar 27, 2007


Being by yourself
is pain itself.

The lonelier you are,
the more you spar.

The worse it gets,
the more your regrets.

Solitary is a jail,
complicating to bail,
agonizing to fail.

You are left sick
as a broken stick
nobody will pick.

Solitary is a confinement
of unbalanced alignment.

You believe nothing matters,
for your mind's with clatters.

It's life without a model
to adore the highest coddle.

No one should be alone,
for it's a world of stone.

Never allow loneliness to come in,
for it becomes a life of sin.

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  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Omg the layout totally threw me lol. anyhow I loved your choice of words,

    Solitary is a confinement
    of unbalanced alignment.

    fav lines :)

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Beautifully penned. Your flow and vocab was so delightful it was sometimes hard to remember this is a sad poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so sad.
    i can relate to it very well.

    You believe nothing really matters,
    for your mind's with clatters.

    It's life without a model
    to adore the highest coddle.

    No one should be alone,
    for it's a world like stone.

    Never allow loneliness to come in,
    for it becomes a life of sin.

    just love the way you have written this.
    5/5
    best wishes
    and take care
    emmeline

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was amazing!! it definitly deserves 5/5... great! and thanks for the comment!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jemma

    Your opening lines are very thoguhtful, and emotive. i think in general you rely to heavilly on rhyme but this is good, but it did seem very forced in places. Your title absolutely rocks. i love it and it is a good piece but yeah i think the rhyming was just a little too much for me.

    Jem

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