Comments : Downtown's Chaotic Silence

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    A few teenagers huddle at a club entrance,
    Smoking a joint: high on life.
    While a homeless woman roams the streets,
    Begging for a small amount of money,
    ------To survive in this world.

    I've missed your voice bby.
    Well done. -hugs- I have nothing to say.

    Stunning. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I loved the last line.. "searching for a part of ourselves" cause thats exactally what everyone in this world is doing.. congrats wonderful poem.