Vermilion

by Idiosyncratic   Mar 28, 2007


The wind appeared so lonely
That lovely, autumn day
The breezes whispered softly
But none hear what they say
The sky forgot it's purpose
So way leads onto way

A lightning bolt so shattered
Like a glass thrown to the ground
The thunder protested briefly
But did not make a sound
The Earth watched with contempt
As the sun turned all around

So passed the autumn night to fall
The leaves shook in the dust
The rain soon lost it's decency
And melted, as if rust
The ashen, smokeless, cloudy skies
Reached for Earth with lust

Without a peaceful tremor
The world recites it's creed
Of wonder and of brilliancy
But leaving out the greed
And as the season rained its' grief
The sky began to bleed

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The imagery was absoulty breathtaking, wonderfully vivid. The emtion once again are deep and strong, It is a great read, and an even better write. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved this poem it was very descriptive and the rhyming didnt seemed forced nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by swill

    Hey Idiosyncratic!
    thank you so much for all those comments....i think i got a placement on your contest but i dont know what....cause its deleted...couldyou please tell me? Thank you...your comments are greatly enjoyed! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow....i didnt get it the first time i read it so i read it again...this is very detailed and it just made me go like wow.. i wish i can write lik tht... very good job =)

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I thought it was a great poem. It seemed really deep and so it was kinda hard to understand, but after reading through it a couple of times I think I get it. Good job. 5/5

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