I thought it was a great poem. It seemed really deep and so it was kinda hard to understand, but after reading through it a couple of times I think I get it. Good job. 5/5

Wow....i didnt get it the first time i read it so i read it again...this is very detailed and it just made me go like wow.. i wish i can write lik tht... very good job =)

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thank you so much for all those comments....i think i got a placement on your contest but i dont know what....cause its deleted...couldyou please tell me? Thank you...your comments are greatly enjoyed! :D

I loved this poem it was very descriptive and the rhyming didnt seemed forced nice job!

The imagery was absoulty breathtaking, wonderfully vivid. The emtion once again are deep and strong, It is a great read, and an even better write. 5/5