Comments : My Pain, My Suffering, My Torment

  • 17 years ago

    by Emo

    Love isn't that bad,
    Someone treating U that way is sad,
    They should be close and careing,
    They never mind sharing,
    They treat U as though U R the only 1 there,
    They won't give U more than U can bear.

    P.S. sorry i wasn't sure how else to express that. Also all U'r poems R very deep and I like them except that U have to endure that pain.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shadows Reign

    Heya. Thanks for your comment.
    Its not that this person was treating me this way, it is just the way that I feel inside, you know? Although it may not seem like it, she was actually trying to protect me.
    Its alright, it was fine how you expressed it. I couldn't have expressed it any better than that. I don't know about the "very deep" part, though I don't really get the same impression as everyone else who reads them does. As for the pain, I guess that just comes with being who I am.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emo

    I totally understand the pain coming with who u r. my mom read one of mine and she kept watching me when i had ANY sharp object like i was actually going to kill myself. so now she is restricted from reading my poems and ur welcome for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emo

    Oh yea forgot to tell u so u don't feel too invaded but this is Arianna just diff. screen name.