This poem was really awesome liked the lines

a women drowning
a teenager slitting her wrists
a man drinking way too much
a baby crying
a dog barking
someone dying
this is what we call
a perfect hell..........im writing a movie and its about all the shit people go through on a daily basis and just how people judge each other...anyway great poem.....keep up the great work...5/5

This is something i've often thought about. it's so sad but so true. i love the short sentances it really helped create the 'atmosphere'. and i love the way you summed up the poem in the line 'this is what we call a perfect hell' so so true. well done

Great poem keep up the good work.