Price of Heaven

Wow..this is interesting...in a good way i mean..this poem is just awsome i dont think i would of thought of something like this..

Im not a real big expert but i though it was fairly well don is for the couple of mistakes i picked up on mentioned in the first comment.

5/5

I like the poem. The subject of the poem was interesting. It was slightly confusing to me, but still interesting. There were some minor errors in typing but only one in the first stanza that really significantly affect the overall read of the poem. I thought the flow was decent, but the rhyming could have been a little better. Some of the rhymes didn't quit click from one line to the next.

Overall I thought the poem was good. 5/5

I like this Poem. You had a prayer in the first stanza.
Give me strength to face the truth,

Needless Death has always been pondered by men and woman. Understanding why is a life long search.
Peace and Blessings5/5

The rhyme scheme was odd and different so although i liked it i never really got used to it. Umm...i thought this poem was really nice...you used the powerful words that shaped the poem in the right direction.

"Failing to see how Heaven is cruel
How pain is the way to life
I fail to see the wars in your name
Cold bloodshed is nothing but shame"

that was my favourite stanza, i felt such truth and relization in it..=]

...as i said, i liked the poem...so 5/5