Wow. This was an amazing poem. It had incredible depth and the vocabulary you used was amazing. The flow and your rhymes worked well and the whole effect was mesmerizing. I believe that this poem was about people fighting to show that they believe in God. Fighting against others for God. I belive that this was about war and terroism in a way, but I may be completely wrong. This was just what I thought when I read the poem. A great poem can make people think many different htings right? Nicely done 5/5

Excellent work, the rhyme scheme was impeccable and I agree completely and utterly with the idea you were potraying. It's ridiculous the way the way religions promote peace but act in violence. It's a complete contradiction. Amazing work! 5/5

Give me the strength to question truth

^^ As for this line…. I don’t know why but in my
head I kept reading it wrong. I was reading it as…
Give me strength to question the truth.
Although the flow of this line if fine, for some
reason I had trouble reading it correctly

Isn't love for you enough for me
And love for others truly light
Must I bow to every "In Gods name"
Though most are of falsified claims?

^^ These lines are amazing, definitely my favorite.
The subject is almost taboo in a sense of the word.
Contradictions of what we have been taught,
Love is not enough, but should be according to what
We have learned.
My personal opinion is you have hit a nerve and made
me look at things with more of an abstract view with
your poem. Awesome Job as usual. 5/5

Dixie

The rhyme scheme was odd and different so although i liked it i never really got used to it. Umm...i thought this poem was really nice...you used the powerful words that shaped the poem in the right direction.

"Failing to see how Heaven is cruel
How pain is the way to life
I fail to see the wars in your name
Cold bloodshed is nothing but shame"

that was my favourite stanza, i felt such truth and relization in it..=]

...as i said, i liked the poem...so 5/5

I like this Poem. You had a prayer in the first stanza.
Give me strength to face the truth,

Needless Death has always been pondered by men and woman. Understanding why is a life long search.
Peace and Blessings5/5

I like the poem. The subject of the poem was interesting. It was slightly confusing to me, but still interesting. There were some minor errors in typing but only one in the first stanza that really significantly affect the overall read of the poem. I thought the flow was decent, but the rhyming could have been a little better. Some of the rhymes didn't quit click from one line to the next.

Overall I thought the poem was good. 5/5

Im not a real big expert but i though it was fairly well don is for the couple of mistakes i picked up on mentioned in the first comment.

5/5

Wow..this is interesting...in a good way i mean..this poem is just awsome i dont think i would of thought of something like this..