This is good.
i like it alot.
i like the way in ur poems how ur title comes from the last or 2nd last line.
its really amazing ur style of writting.
im adding you to my favs
much love .xx

Wow this poem is great! I'm sure so many girls can relate to it... actually I went through a very similar experience growing up... all my friends were changing, expecting me to change with them and I didn't want to party and all that... I think everyone feels the pressure to "grow up" before they are ready at some point... and this poem shows that exactly. Very well written... I love it and can really relate to the feelings in it. Nice write!! 5/5!!

Omg I'm gonna save this and read it to my daughter in ten years lol. Another great poem! 5/5

marcella

Good poem

"Her friends are all about the party scene,
While she's still Daddy's little girl."

and that was me!... when i turned 16.. that is insane... this is like the perfect poem for almost every girl... or most of them that i know, and it definitely is like my life once i turned 16...
basically all of your poems are my favorite!
fantastic =)
5/5

Nice message.
good job

I really liked this poem. It's something that all young girls should read. I know I was stupid and let the guy get to me, and I know I would take it back if I could. This poem is really inspirational you should try and get it in a book or something for teenage girls. I really enjoyed reading this. 5/5

Woooooooow
a very beatiful way of writing
i told you before you're tallented and this poem shows that
this is a very interessted idea you write about well done

Woooooooow
a very beatiful way of writing
i told you before you're tallented and this poem shows that
this is a very interessted idea you write about well done

Great message,
I would of liked to read this at 16!
:)
Well, put.
Keep up the great work!