by Gem Mar 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Drawing a heart upon the sand |
Ohkay. i love this. |
by dora
Great poem hun always enjoy reading ur work xx |
by Eibutsina
Your poem was real and thats what I enjoyed about it the most. Your rhymes flowed well they didnt seem strained it al flowed well from one stanza to the next while leaving me feeling a lil warm and fuzzy inside ;o) |
Awww this is good i like this. i THINK i know how this feels im not to sure. good job 5/5 |
A little poem but filled with so much love and feeling. It was really beautiful. I loved it. |