Sweet perfection (acrostic) (collab)

by Leanne   Mar 28, 2007


**Collab With SoSickOfTears**

Seems I'm always dreaming of him
Wanting to be in his arms
Enticing me into his world
Exciting me with his charms.
Time stops in his presence
Precious moments we share
Every kiss makes me fall faster
Reliving times he was there
Faithful to him I'll always be
Enchanting me every day
Cupid's struck me with his arrow again
Trillions of reasons why with him I want to stay
Inside My stomach flutters
One day i know, my dreams will come true
Next to me he's standing, saying 'I do.'

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  • 17 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    This Is Mere Perfection...I Think This Is The Goal That Every Poet Strives For...Being Able To Make Two Different Voices 'One'
    And I Think This Was Just Pure Perfection The Way It Came Out
    5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    This was a beautiful and sentimental write...i jus loved the ending as it captured the entire poem and ended it off strong!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Yet another excellent poem I have come across on your page...who's this person you keep collaberating with?
    She must be damn good.
    AHAHAHAHA
    As always, I think we did a good job!

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