Comments : Sweet perfection (acrostic) (collab)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Yet another excellent poem I have come across on your page...who's this person you keep collaberating with?
    She must be damn good.
    AHAHAHAHA
    As always, I think we did a good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    This was a beautiful and sentimental write...i jus loved the ending as it captured the entire poem and ended it off strong!!

  • This Is Mere Perfection...I Think This Is The Goal That Every Poet Strives For...Being Able To Make Two Different Voices 'One'
    And I Think This Was Just Pure Perfection The Way It Came Out
    5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo