Okay, my favorite out of all the ones I've read so far. Such great use of words, very powerful, and ended very well. I really like the title, it fits the poem well. God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)
4/6

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I think everyone else said all the things i wanted to say aabout this poem, so all i will say is i agree with them
exellent poem as always.

As I read this poem I saw the words I couldn't find when she broke up with me. I want to cry....this is amazing.

Wow! bravo! very good write! keep up the good work! now i have to read all of them!
god bless

I break apart with every word.
Divert your eyes so YOU aren't hurt.
Don't care for me, I will be fine...
(There goes my "Once upon a time...")

^bloody Awesome stanza!
Awesome Poem!
Loved it!
Nice flow
Nice Vocab
One of the best i've read so far!
Really,Awesome poem
Great work
Keep it up

Keep Smiling.

Wow!!!! thats.... an amazing poem! my fav part wuz this:
I'm losing air, it's hard to breathe;
The water's creeping up on me.
Each breath I take may be my last...
(I'm going down... I'm sinking fast.)

idk why but ya...o.o a poem like this should beh published in a book 1 day...n.n great job!!! keep it up and im putting this in meh favs!!! once again, great job!!!
~*~Skye~*~

This is the BEST poem ever to me!
i love it
great job!

The most beautiful heartbreaking poem I've read in a long time.

You're my hero, senor. =]
beautifully executed. I'm in awe!