This poem had a great message, and I liked most of the rhyming. There was one stanza where the rhming wasn't as great. The words were too close and I don't think it turned out as good as you usually write. Also, in my opinion, I think the last line should be broken down in two.

This poem is a really sweet one.

Take care.

I liked this poem very much! It had a lot of meaning, feeling and hope inside. I may have been the only one to see it, but I do. I liked how you phrased it, and how made it blend. Together you created a wonderful poem that should be read by others! Great job!

I thought this was a nicely penned poem, however it seemed a little bit jumpy. Anyway, it had a nice message and I enjoyed reading it very much.

:)

Oh the love, yet there is more to it. i know. its great to know that you put this poem on here too. cause i just read it. and i am glad i did. i enoyed it very much.

5/5 David

Here you are girl
She won a Third place with this
I choosed this cos expression and wordig was so compatible
And the feelings were inside it is a difficult thing to do
So keep it up hun
Your friend
LauRa

I so luved dis poem

Very personal and emotional piece, it has greatly created atmosphere and it is unique. I like the way that you expressed your feelings, beautifully written but also sad. Well done!