by BECCA lessTHANthree Mar 28, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
family
5 floors up, an old elevator |
by CEE CEE
WOW I LOVED IT ESPECIALLY THE HEARTBREAKING PART I DUNNO WHY I LOVED THAT PART SO MUCH I GUESS ITS BECAUSE THATS WHEN IT HIT ME......I LOVED IT GOOD JOB |
Beautiful work..u've captured emotions well thru this one...sad yet well written...n this one also....the flow was amazing...n the emotions are crystal clearly expressed...fine descriptions too..good job on this one |
by DavidBrendan
You made a lot of good imaginary with your words and description of simple thing like tiles, very good. 5/5 |
by DavidBrendan
You made a lot of good imaginary with your words and description of simple thing like tiles, very good. 5/5 |
by Teria
I loved this poem, I can easily relate to it. I think being able to put these kind of emotions into a poem.. this great, is extremely hard. This poem proves you have talent beyond your years. |