This is awesome i love it good job i love dark stuff lol woohoo good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keenan

Wow, that gave me the chills, You lost your flow towards the middle, and lost me for a second, but all together, you did a 5/5 job hun. Great Work!

-Liz-
~muahs to all~

Nice visualisaition here. chilling, and dark but well thought out, like a thriller. good vocabulary and tenor. nice work.

Awesome poem...

*isabel*