Cindy,

You are really capturing all of the categories here on the site and this shows how versatile you are. I was surprised to see you in this category but then reading this justifies it all. You are really so talented.

This one is amazing

Her heart made of stone
Man eater is her name
Queen of reeking havoc
She loves playing this game

Though scary but i cant stop loving womens... :o))

all the best and take care

Wow thats so amazing and dark poem, superb write .
She captured your heart
On souls she would feed
Threw it on the floor
Stomping watching it bleedi love this stanza, kind of gives peep into a dark soul ,very well written.

Take care
chavii.

Wow, you described April to a T. I wish she wasn't eating my uncle...........

I agree with Rachel on this one....although I know who it's really about! Actually describes a few I've known! Good job Cindy.....lol.

Hey Cindy
A Deep dark and heartfelt write...your words were most passionate, keep up the great work!
Luv Risa

Wow.
Purely fantastic. Everything flowed so well & the emotions felt throughout the poem were so strong to the reader. Once again, Cindy, the poem was amazing. Wonderful talent as a writer. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Very nice, Cindy. I love your anger underneath. There's just thing biting tone in the poem. I like that most I think.

:)

I love this poem!

I feel what ur saying i feel i know someone of the same calling, you penned these people well great job

I have a poem under this title but it's written from a humourous context, you've managed to capture the true personality of one of these horrible beings.
It's not just men that are prone to breaking hearts.. women can be just as cruel
Excellent dark poem sweets
5/5
*Gem*

Wow... great write.. i loved the whole idea of the poem.. the open stanza was very poem.. great flow! such an imaganative poem! well done
xxx
~*kirsty*~

Damn this is so awsome reminds me of some s l u t s i know

What a great poem. i liked this. i think the lenght works really well. it doesnt need to be any longer. reminded me a bit of someone i know x

Amazing

Amazing.. and very well written the words were perfect.. Its sad how cruel some women (and men to of course) can be when it comes to other people's feelings. Way to go.

A little...Hall & Oates inspired? very nice work, as it is very true