Hold me tight

by crystaljean88   Mar 29, 2007


Hold me tight and never let go,
How you feel about me, I need to know.

Why did you say yes, when I asked you out?
All the wrong things I did to you, I need to tell you about.

As I try to explain, you tell me to not worry,
You said you have no need to here the story.

I ask you why you took me back, after all my wrong,
The answer you gave me sure wasn't long.

The words you said has never came to mind,
You said I was the love of your life, you wouldn't leave behind.

So hold me tight and never let go,
For I will always be your girl and my love for you will always show.

3/27/07

I dedicate this poem to Brent also. he is the best boyfriend i can ever have no matter what happens.... i love u.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great poem...it flowed nicely except the last line sounded a little forced..maybe a little too long. but overall good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    This is a great write. i can relate. the flow was good and it was great to read. great job. 5/5 for me

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Hey gurl u can do better than brent any day ur a sweet person and dont let anyone every tell u any different. i love the poem even though its about my cousin..lol

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Loved it...beautiful wrk...flow was also good enough n all in all...Good poem..kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Quite nice poem,flows pretty wel :)
    "You said you have no need to here the story"
    to "hear" maybe?
    and change the i's into I ( small errors really have a bad effect on an otherwise good poem )
    good poem ,keep on writing :)

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