I really like your poem....

Quite nice poem,flows pretty wel :)
"You said you have no need to here the story"
to "hear" maybe?
and change the i's into I ( small errors really have a bad effect on an otherwise good poem )
good poem ,keep on writing :)

Loved it...beautiful wrk...flow was also good enough n all in all...Good poem..kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Hey gurl u can do better than brent any day ur a sweet person and dont let anyone every tell u any different. i love the poem even though its about my cousin..lol

This is a great write. i can relate. the flow was good and it was great to read. great job. 5/5 for me

Great poem...it flowed nicely except the last line sounded a little forced..maybe a little too long. but overall good poem.