This poem had a definte raw emotion that immediately came out from your words as soon as I read it. You're flow was great, and imagery played a great part in this poem. Although, I don't like "And I'm running out of clock", it sounds a bit forced and awkward. And "But never mind is all is said", that line seemed a little misplaced. Maybe an extra 'is' was there by accident? But I absolutely loved your poem, every time I read your poem you always have something new to say - you're words just draw me in. Kudos!

Why is all of your poetry so excellent, I wonder! 5/5

♥Ravyn