J Love

by Love Fallacy   Mar 29, 2007


A song and a poem
a kiss and a rose
love from inside the heart
is where it starts to grow

thorns break the skin
words never heal
kisses ease the pain
and hide how you feel

the words always said
but never really meant
just letters from the mouth
like an envelope their sent

but so pretty that you are
and caring all the same
a chill everytime
i decide to say your name

hands held side by side
a feeling that of care
now day after day
we'll have memories to share

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  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    This one gave me chills.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    One thing, capitolize your i's. I think there was like one, maybe to you had there that weren't. Secondly, It's very common to actually capitolize the first letter of ever line, it's just what people do. if that's not your style, dont worry about it. just a suggestion. overall, a sweet poem though. beautiful. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by elmozbabiigurl7

    Omfg that was really goood :) u shudd really keep it up ur amazing at it

  • 17 years ago

    by Devil in The Night

    Thanx for the comment. you have amazing talent 2. love your poems and quotes!! keep goin:>

  • 17 years ago

    by corrina

    Tht is amazing ! ....
    wish i was tht gud
    keep it up xxxxxxxx corrina xxxxxxxx

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