Wow, such a nice poem. I loved all the lines.

Very nice imeragery..did that really happene? either wya very nice job ove your work keep it up.

melissa

I think i have fallen in love with this poem!! So romantic it was like i was standing there watching the whole thing happen, very well written, flowed well and the imagery was fantastic!! Your definately going on my favourites, i can't wait to read more of your work :)

Oh wow...I frikken adore this poem.
Such an excellent opener, and each stanza was betetr than the last.
I love the ending, it was so romantic, it made me all mushy haha.
You outdid yourself with this one!

Beautiful, so nicely penned .The emotions runs so high in each line.
Great work.

Take care
chavii.

This was soo beautiful!! i loved it great wording, structure everything was beautiful keep em coming xx

Hehe, i'm alllowed to comment cos i'm not the only judge of this contest so i would like to take this opportunity to say... Wow!
Excellent write!
And in answer to your question, i believe in the saying, "Follow your heart", it may lead you to disaster sometimes, but it has fun along the way. And it knows what you want better than your head, it doesn't analyze things to death =)
5/5
*Gem*

Ummmm "My Dearest Romantic" :) I just got finished watching "Holiday" with Cameron Diaz then read this.. dang I'm mess'd up for the night! ~LOL~ I love your writings... I see a story in each one. Thank you fo sharing them..always the "Hopeless Romantic" tom

Hey, great poem- really really romantic! I loved your descriptive style and flow, great read.. keep them comming
Kay xxx

That really was amazing. Few words meaning so much.

Beautiful

Its so cute great way of setting it out

Romantic Lover,
I love romantic poetry and you really have a hold on it. I'm not sure of the rhyming pattern as it can make the poem sound cheesy but over all I totally enjoyed it.

I really liked this peom

How beautiful :) Excellent job on this poem.

On his shoulder I lean in to rest my head
He breaks my glide and kisses me instead
A deep passionate kiss we share under the stars
The most romantic experience we've shared by far

Paints such a beautiful picture in the mind.
Take Care Cindy

So beautifuly written

Nice job.

I loved this poem. It's something that I would hope happen to me one day. Well done!