Dramatic End

by isabel   Mar 29, 2007


Forget me
As quick as you can
I was just a weird girl
With a dramatic end

I was already lost
Why don't you see
I was haunted by the past
I was a sweet melody

I was drowning myself
In my own creepy tears
I was crying for help
I was consumed by my fears

But all sweet, melodic souls
Vanish with the same old cry:
"Why didn't you go looking for me?
It was your choice to let me die"

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I was already lost
    Why don't you see
    I was haunted by the past
    I was a sweet melody

    Thoser were my favorite line... It was writen beautifully! I really enjoyed reading it. It was short and simple but didn't lack anything. I think it was very powerful=]

  • 17 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Play your sweet melody,
    for as long as you can,
    make out of your life a parody,
    don't fall due to men!

  • 17 years ago

    by Amba

    But all sweet, melodic souls
    Vanish with the same old cry:
    "Why didn't you go looking for me?
    It was your choice to let me die"

    i really liked that bit!
    Very good
    -bam

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