Thought this was a great poem. short but sweat, and i also liked the kinda off beat rythm of it as well.
5/5
-Black night-

Madski my darling, you've written some poems!!! Wooo! I do think that this one is describing your mysterious tormented soul reaching out in a desperate plea of pity and self loathing.

Or maybe it's just you being bored and writing poetry..... ;)

Loving it whatever it may be about...

LF
XxX