LiFElESS>^

by Vanessa   Mar 29, 2007


How do you know your really alive,
when you only feel a lifeless touch,
love on empty feelings,
and breathe for another life.

Is life in the form of love?
does destiny believe we live for another human?
Day in and day out every soul out there craves,
craves the feeling of emotion and love, compassion and trust,

But in return we get what we fear most. . .
that painful lifeless emotion.
You can love another with all your soul,
and still be invisible.

We're living in a world of millions of people,
we wake, smile, and live for one other person,
why can't we love and live for ourselves. . .
why is life so . . .
lifeless?

comment plz ( i just wrote this, and its pretty much my thoughts...)

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  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Use question marks when they are needed
    And yeah I agree, why do/should we have to feel the responibilty to have to live for another? I mean we don't HAVE too, but it's our soul, emotions ect ect that maeks us. But why? I guess it's just love....love does exsist, love is everything. People live for another because they want to be loved and they simply just want to love.
    Lovely poem, thanks for making my brain tick lol