by Teria Mar 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I wonder how they felt, |
I like how you wrote a poem based on something *real*. I mean, don't get me wrong, poems about relationships, love, etc *are* real, but they're constantly done, over and over again. |
by Yuna
This poem had a powerful feeling and you, I think did a very good deed to those loved ones. You created something that will always be around to share for those who want strength. I think you have done a great thing. Thank-you. I also liked how you made the poem blend and easy to read. It made for a masterpiece that really should be read by others as well. Great job! |