NIce poem... I really like it, it is deep.. anyways, maybe u should call this like something with heart break in it cause thats what the poem is all about; ok well keep it up, i hope that i helped a lil... xox

Nice peom really deep, maybe you should call it, "Broken Heart Pain" or "the Pain of A Broken heart" something like that

Hey.
i think this is a really good poem! i think you should call it "Break Me Down"

Oh, my God, i know exactly what your feeling. I felt the same way when my first boyfriend broke my heart. i think you should call it, " Tears Of A Broken Heart"