What if..

by StormyStar   Mar 29, 2007


What if i were to cut my wrist and bleed all over..
what would you do?

what if i were to die and you had one chance to tell me how you felt..
what would you say?

what if you could hold me one last time..
would you keep me in your arms?

what if i were to walk away you knowing i love you..
would you stop me?

tell me the truth, can you care for me like i do you?
would you treat me better then i would treat you?
can your love for me really be there?
why can't you tell me.. what if..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    All the what if's in the world never solve a delimma. However, I sit here and ask the same darn things over and over again... I have been for three years now and just cannot seem to find the answers.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    I gave you a 5 but i towards the ending i think you cut some off, you had amazing flow in the beginning, getting the reader warmed up but you didnt reach the climax. your poem DID make me feel like you were talking to me, which is a really really good thing, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by brokenxxxheartedx3

    Awesome poem... i am adding to my favs.

    </3 Jess </3

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    There are some tiny mistakes, such as mispelled words and such, make sure you check these before you submit.
    Apart from that i liked the style and content. The flow was good and the imagery was okay.
    keep writing to improve the talent you already have
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    Itme misspelled time correct
    woud misspelled would correct
    liek misspelled like correct

    small mistakes like these should be rectified before even posting Plot121

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