by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Mar 29, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
A silver blade strikes fresh skin - |
OMG! thats awesome!...ive done a parquette before it was crap...you seemed to pull this one of extremely well... |
by aDORKable x3
Oh!Emm!Gee! I could NEVER write like you do. You write with such words and you capture the reader into a time frame, however brief, and they go away with a residual (sp?) effect of the poem still lingering in their mind. You use such vivid and fantastic words and the flow and rhymes are always amazing! I don't read a lot of work that meets the standards that you have ((effortlessly, might I add)) set. I love it! As always, 5/5 and GREAT JOB!! |
Stunningly deep, meaning goes far 5/5 keep up the intense poems |
Wow...that's dark. I can just imagine the skin splitting-*Sar K* |